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Donna Price

Posts: 1
Member since: 8/10/2008

Let me know what you think

I'd love your feedback on my new site:

www.bizology.biz

Thanks

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All the best,

Donna
Donna Price
Bizology.Biz -- The Science of Building Thriving Businesses....

http://www.bizology.biz

Report Abuse | Date: 8/10/2008 9:48:41 PM

TexasWebDevelopers

Posts: 7039
Member since: 9/24/2002
From: USA

RE: Let me know what you think (in reply to Donna Price)

I suppose you read somewhere (or bought some sort of on-line sales pitch) that building a "sales letter" type site would make you rich and successful. Frankly it's a turnoff for me. If you don't hook your users with your message in the first six seconds you lose them. Your tag line:
Bizology.Biz --"the science of building thriving businesses"
simply made me laugh and discount your page as the fluff it is.
If you are serious, try taking your content to a professional web content copywriter who will show you how to craft a professional web page.

< Message edited by TexasWebDevelopers -- 8/10/2008 11:54:53 PM >

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